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Clowne Junior School

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Once you have completed your chapter of Lemony Snicket's Series of Unfortunate Events, you will need to review and edit your work.


Using a different coloured pen or pencil crayon review your work.


You will need to start by proof reading your chapter and making sure that all of your sentences are demarcated properly and that you have avoided any run on sentences.


Next, work through the success criteria. Have you included the following?

  • Features of Lemony Snicket writing (ie talking to the reader, emphasising the negatives)
  • Expanded noun phrases
  • Parenthesis
  • Semi-colons and Colons
  • Creative vocabulary


Finally, are you able to uplevel any of your vocabulary. Could you have used more powerful language? Could you have uplevel to an expanded noun phrase, etc.


Once completed and reviewed, be sure to upload your chapter to ClassDojo.